You've got everything going for you in this, Ebon. The percussion is excellently placed, and the guitar riff is catchy and makes you want to dance, when combined. Everything blends fantastically. If I were to give a criticism, the guitar's lower tones could be a little louder when everything drops down to listen to that low melody you use. That's about all the criticism I have, love the piece!
(you should totally call it corpse party btw.)
Thanks! and done.
Uploaded without background?
Why did you think there'd be a problem with the guitar solo? Unless you're actually doing a dedicated A Capella style song, there's no point just uploading your singing - we want to be able to match you to chords, and music helps to support your vocals. That's the point of music. Maybe you should've sought out an instrumental version.
On top of that, there was that section at the start where you must've gotten close to the microphone, and as such, you distorted your voice out. Next time, ensure you stay the same distance from the microphone.
Finally, you're singing with a very nasal tone. A lot of sounds which should be 'ung' turn out to 'uhn'. It makes this song very difficult to listen to and, with the lack of power behind your voice, is also causing you to flatten your notes. So, 1/5 and 2/10, for trying, but you need serious work.
Oh, when the melody kicked in...
It just followed from there. Fantastic job. I loved the half time section, as well as the parts where the melody line fell into itself through distortion. Exceptional control of melody everywhere. My only qualm might be that the build-up was a little too much but really, fantastic all around. I loved it!
Thanks! I really appreciate the great review! :)
As soon as the Songs of Storms came it, it was just... sheer bliss. Amazing work. Indeed, I too wish that in the future you create a Temple Medley. You definitely have the brilliance to do so. ^^
An excellent work indeed.
GOD DAMNIT WRONG SONG. :/
Blargh. I posted a comment on Glowsticks by accident. So, yeah, look there for my comment, coz I cbf to copy it here. Ugh.
This song is awesome! My one problem is with the opening melody-eqsue thing... the repeated note from some sort of electronic sound always sounds like it's lagging behind. :/ I think it's just me though.
So yeah, TOP 5 HOPEFULLY!
it IS you
and wtf man :P how did u even think that this was my most recent song? xD
This is awesome, you've done an awesome job of mixing all the sounds. If only you have gotten first... Ah well, good job indeed.
It seems Newgrounds places little importance on this place. I find it highly demeaning. Without music, what would happen in the background of Flash videos?
I'm sure your song will continue to grow in popularity. Good job. ^^
Thanks a lot man!
Yea, the Audio Portal isn't considered important...its retarded. Maybe one day they will wise up and fix this place.
Of course it's good!
I'm guessing you'll want me to bump this one up as well? o3o
I quite like it indeed. Remixed remix, that's just like you. xP
I'm going to upload Dance of the Electrons to Youtube sometime soon when it's not such a hectic time at school. xP All the assignments have come out so early. :V
not for me
tech - no
english - no
maths - no
manual drawings - yes
media - yes
drama - no
so yeh only 2/6 :P
You had me at Popcorn...
And it just got better from there. You truly are an excellent artist, and I'm sure that I'll see much more from you in the future. (Especially if I add you to my favourites. o3o)
If I had to give one critism it would be that at the end of the first line, where it progresses into the higher melody, it really should go up instead of going back down like before. But still, a wonderful tool to listen to. The centre section is especially captivating! ^^
LAK OV FASARS I IS NOOB
Aha, well... I better not be. ;D Yeah, I listened to it on Youtube, and I think you played it for me, but yes, you are indeed a good artist. And your work is sure to become popular. I'm trying to increase my EXP on here to assist you further. We shall see what happens. ^^
ANYWAY. GOOD JOB. ^w^b
this is a SexSong
its a song for sex ;)
no joke :D
but on a more serious side, i doub that my music will ever be noticed. people now vote on names, rather than songs :(
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